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   يا زلمه إنت ما بتستحي؟ ما عندك غير غشاء البكارة تحكي عنو. عيب يا زلمه. خلي عندك شوية حياء! جد عيب! يعني القصة صارت قديمه و كتير ماسخةأي كس أختك شو خوللأ عفواً، غشاء بكارة أختك

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   يعني بظن انك بلشت تخبص !! يعني ما زبط إلا هيك و عملت عبير محجبة كمان !!ليه ما عملتها لابسة صليب مو كان انسب إلك!!اكتب يلي بدك ياه بس ماتلمح بشي إلو دخل بالإعتقاد الديني لأنه بصير الموضوع حساس زيادة كل واحد على دينو الله يعينو … و شوية إحترام يا فادي

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   qabbani, it has nothing to do with religious beliefs. I respect all religions. It is a short script of a story against honor crimes in Jordan. Can I ask you something? How many women among those who were killed for honor were veiled? The answer is certainly not null, is it? Being veiled or wearing a cross doesn’t make a person saint. We are all sinners, yet I am defending Abeer and her choices.It is hypocrisy that kills us in this society. People claim high morals with face superficial gestures while do a lot in secrecy. Don’t play this game with me and don’t dare to turn this into a religious offence.

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   Fadi , this is just repeating ur older post in the form of a play !

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   lost within, yes it, I want to hear a feedback so that to make it a better script. This is a short film script that I wrote based on my previous post.

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   مالي شايف انه إله داعي هلحكي و كيف ربطو بجرائك الشرف الزانية زانية بغض النظر عن دينها و بغض النظر عن جرائم الشرف يلي بترخي جسمها بدافع الحب هبلة و ألف هبلة كمان , لما يكون الشباب يلي فلبلد زولم و قد حالهم و ما عم بتضحكو على البنات و نيتهم صافية بصير في حكي تاني مش كل مين حب وحدة لازم ينام معها هيك لما اتكون متحررة من الدين و من المجتمع تعمل يلي بدها ياه , طول ما نحن عايشين ب مجتمع بإعتباره محافظ و عنده قيم الكل بدو يمشي عليه ويلي مش عاجبة يروح في ميت بلد بتستقبلو طول ما هي معتنقة دين , بغض النظر مقتنعة ولا لأ , و بتعمل هيك شي اسمها زانية و انتهى الموضوع و اسمو زاني كمان و هدول موجودين من قبل الأديان , يلي كانت تنام مع شب بدافع الحب و مافي اي رباط بينهم كانو يحكو بسمعتها و انها رخيصة و قصص الحب المعروفة اكتيير حبو بعض اكتير بس اكتر من نظرة ما كان في بينهممش فاهم انا شو الفكرة من كل هالحكي ,انه خلص مع مين ما بدها تروح تحب و تنام…. على كل تروح تعمل يلي بدها ياه طول ما هي محررة من الدين يعني ما عندها اعتقاد ديني ابدا , هيك ما حدى إلو عندها و تعمل يلي بدها ياه غير هيك ما بتزبط و بحكيلك خلي كلامك بدون تأشير على نوع الإعتقاد بكون افضل

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   qabbani, the story didn’t end yet. There is act 2 and act 3. Her brother will shoot her and her lover. This is an honor crime. It is what we are trying to fight against in Jordan. Notice that the issue of honor crimes is IN JORDAN and around 70% of the Jordanian adult women are in fact veiled. Women are entitled their own believe. I have known many muslim and christian people in my life, and no one have bee able to carry on with his religious teachings 100%. And even those following certain religions, they have different views and beliefs regarding issues in their religion. In addition to that, each one is weak in an area that he slips at. Abeer is a Jordanian Muslim women. She may have strong religion values, but she her love for Samer were stronger. She is weak in that department. You can call her whatever you like, it is your opinion, but her punishment shouldnt be in your hand. She doesn’t deserve to be shot. It is against human rights and human ethics and morals. Her sexuality is up to her.Now, for the other topic. DONT take charge of society. Don’t claim moral and conversatism. We are no longer living in a close societies. Amman is a big city and we have many sub societies with many sub cultures. All are living under the Jordanian law. All should have the same rights and duties especially the right to LIVE.

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   this one is a miss .weak script !! too much unnecessary details,and somehow too obvious orientation !

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   ok i just read ur comments and as i understand you’re willing to shoot a short movie ,here is my advice -since u asked for feedback – , in order to deliver your msg and convince people with it ,hence serving its purpose ,you ought to be smart in the way you present it,avoid “insulting” confrontations ,of course everything is relevant ,and thats where u gotta be smooth and try to gain as many people on ur side not get ppl defensive about ur project and therefore not take it or you seriously .but if you just want to cause something with controversy ,thats easy.

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    و بتعرف انه 80% من جرائم الشرف كانو من عذراوات يعني كان عندهم غشاء بكارة يعني اذا بدك تربط النسبتين 70% محجبات و انه 80 % ما مارسو الجنس كامل ف بتعرف انه المحجبة مو سهل تفقد بكارتها بدافع الحب بس بتفقد شرفها و عفتها لما بتكون رخيصة , بدافع الحب الجنسي اما انه بتحكي انها Abeer is a Jordanian Muslim women. She may have strong religion valuesيعني كلامك عنها مش منطقي اطلاقا لأنه لو فعلا هي هيك ف هي ماعندها قيم الدين من أصلو بهيط تصرفات ف كيف زبططت معك!!بعدين صحيح مافي تعليم ديني 100% بس هاد مابيعني انه الواحد يعمل ال 7 و ذمتها و يحكيلك انه انا ما تعلمت ديني صح وهي حرية بغض النظر عن الإعتقاد , جرائم الشرف مو محصورة بهيك قضايا و بس و الموضوع مو حرية و البطيخ المبسمر الموضوع موضوع قروون يعني لما الشب مو البنت يصير قرن يشوف اختو مع شب و يعرف انها نامت معو بدافع الحرية و يسئلها كيف الشب ريحك !! و بعرف انه الشب بتسلى فيها وانه حب بس شغل فك محنة و انه الشب مش جدي بعلاقتو و نحن شباب فاهمين على بعض بهيك قصص , لأنه لو كان جدي كان ما خبى علاقتو وراح دق الباب و لو كان كفؤ اهلها ما برفضو و اذا مافي نصيب بكون لا حول ولا , و الواحد من أولها يعرف مع مين يرتبط عشان مايكون في مانع للعلاقة الجدية بينهم طول ما في اعتناق ديني مافي شي اسمو حرية جنسيةاطلاقا فلا تخلط الإمور ببعض القانون الإردني في بند اسمو الزنى بالتراضي اذا عمرك سمعت فيه

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    Love the script, Love doesn’t relate to religion, when you love someone you don’t even care if he is religiousless?Qabbani, we are in a new world. these days let’s say as an example, your sister telling you she goes out with a guy and you see him/like him is better because you at least know about it.we are in an age where you can’t control anyone anymore.Arabs still think women are low profile.

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    Naser, I respect your opinion. I just don’t agree. I wanted to deliver something strong that is in bar with the serious aspect of honor killings. Qabbani, you didn’t read the story to the end. Abeer is technically a virgin!!! That is the point, that is the shalowness of our measurment. Women can have sex as much as they want in discretion as long as they keep their hymen intact! and it isn’t even considered sex by some! That is the art of hypocrisy we are masters at.I disagree with you. There is strong logic behind what I said. People’s love emotion is strong, it can drives some to act against what they believe in. That doesn’t make them unworthy, even if they sin according to some other people’s beliefs.lol! You made me laugh man! Shoo it is mawdoo3 groon! GROW UP! GROW UP! GROW UP!

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    قباني إنت غبي ولا بتتغابا؟بشرفك يعني، روح احكي باليلنجي والمكدوس أو أي أكله تانية بتفهم فيها أنضفلك من ما مطلع حالك طشمه!!

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    yup i understand .its not like I don’t like the idea of presenting something raw !again,strictly professionally in my humbled opinion ,this won’t do,its just like Jordanian series attempts to be funny that comes off plain stupid .this here is on the other side tho.anyway.good luck.

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    Eza lam tasta7i fa ef3al ma she2t.

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    انت انسان مريض وعندك عقدة شرف .. اذا يا اخي انت شرفك كثير بشد عليك اخلص منه احسن .. ما ضل اشي في الدنيا تحكي عنه غير شرفك وما تحمله اختك بين فخديها ..

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    I can’t believe that ppl are still supporting honor crimes!!! even in Islam the punishment is not death (for unmarried), it is 80 “Jaldah” with the condition that it doesn’t leave any marks (not harmful), and having 4 witnesses. 4 witnesses! what are the chances to have 4 ppl witnessing 2 ppl having sex, very low, meaning that even the Islamic punishment is supposed to happen very rarely and under very strict conditions killing is against all religions, and anyone that is capable of killing has no honor!what is happening in Jordan has nothing to do with religion, and I can’t even call that conservative, it is a behavior of a nation that didn’t develop and is still living by the law of the wild.and those who allowed themselves to curse the writer and call him names, are just showing the weakness of their arguments. good work Fadi, allah yi2aweek. cheers,

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    Natasha, o ye2aweeke kaman 🙂

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    The problem is not that some of you are with or against honor killings or with or against sex before marriage. The problem is that some of you are against the guy talking! It’s called freedom of speech.So let him talk about the hymen.There always has to be someone to challenge el-fekr el-3am (current mentality) otherwise everything will always stay the same, and societies will never evolve.If we all behave the same way, then we have no one to learn from. If we are all too scared to talk about what is not regarded as normal in our society, then we will never nit2adam.So thanks Fadi for doing this step for us. I salute you. I for one am too scared to blog not anonymously. Our society just makes it too hard.As for those who got offended because she’s wearing a 7ijab. I’m very familiar with how much animosity we have in Jordan between Muslims and Christians and I even < HREF="http://differentperspective1.blogspot.com/2008/08/animosity-between-different-faiths-in.html" REL="nofollow">blogged<> about it this morning. However, to me the observer does seem to be writing to tackle the issue at hand and he doesn’t seem to be against anyone. It is worth noting that many of those women who die because of honor killings are religious themselves.Qabbani, her values are hers. If she believes in Allah and believes that sex before marriage is okay, then let her be. If she believes in Allah and believes she sinned by being with a man then let her be as well.

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